You have made a very good start to the year; you work well in class, get involved in class discussions and your first task is solid. You have used large images which make the text difficult to read - either add more pages for pictures or make the images smaller to make the presentation look better and the text easier to read. Please do this by the 26th September.
Also check that you understand everything you have written - I'd rather you put it in your own words if you are not sure what some things mean.
Daniel,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a very good start to the year; you work well in class, get involved in class discussions and your first task is solid. You have used large images which make the text difficult to read - either add more pages for pictures or make the images smaller to make the presentation look better and the text easier to read. Please do this by the 26th September.
Also check that you understand everything you have written - I'd rather you put it in your own words if you are not sure what some things mean.
Ellie